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stinkclaw
stinkclawLv142yr
2022-07-26 05:52

Just finished the 1st chapter I find this incredibly interesting. For most of the 1st chapter it did sound like 2 computers talking to themselves. My only criticism would be space out the word/paragraph density more So they'd be easier to read in the app.

A cyborg in the Wasteland

SpiraSpira
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99 Chs

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SpiraSpira
SpiraSpiraAuthor

Thanks for the review. That was kind of intentional, the two perspective sort of thing. and it continues to a lesser degree in chapter 2 and pretty much stops entirely in chapter 3. I'm aware that it can be a little off putting on the first chapter, which is not a great decision for getting people to read through it buuut that's just how it is. I hope you continue reading! Thanks.

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A rare Fallout fanfic on webnovel that is well written and has an interesting premise. The author takes the lore and weaves it pretty well into the story they are telling. Love it and hope the author is able to complete it. Many thanks for using your talents in an area I enjoy so much.

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I am, of course, going to rate my own story as 5 stars. If I didn't like it I wouldn't be writing it! But I definitely hope to see some other reviews by other people, feel free to tell me where I've gone wrong. If you hate it, I'd appreciate knowing what parts and if anything changed would change your mind! Thanks!

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