Problem with the story is how he just has everything at the start. Sure he could be a little op at the start but you pretty much gave him everything without giving any reason on how he obtained them. Its pretty boring and his relationship with the other characters feel artificial. I have read a lot of op characters but atleast their opness came with an advantage at the start which they exploited to become op in the future.
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Ok friend, first I don't want to write more than 100 chapters explaining how the Mc becomes strong, and secondly, "the relationship with the other characters seems artificial", that is, he has barely been written interacting with some characters and not with all of them, and you come to say that their relationship is artificial....
I was talking about the people he summons and yeah, they are just loyal to him because the system forces fhem to become loyal to him so yeah artificial. Look i am not saying that you have to write 100 chapters on how he got strong, could have easily been done with 5 to 10 chapters. Atleast make it understandable on how he got this strong, he already has ansystem that could have something that speeds up his growth in power.
Well, although the System makes them loyal to it, that does not mean that they have their own thoughts and etc., they are not simple machines and that's it.
