Review Detail of Nikkie_LZ in Deadly Travels

It's a promising start. I rarely read male MC, but this one was good. The writing is very simple so is easy to understand. I can't really say much because there are only 2 chapters so far. My only suggestion is to revise your paragraph length in chapter two because sometimes long paragraphs are tedious to get through. Overall, it was an enjoyable novel. Keep working hard author-sama!