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So, the story starts with an interesting premise. Demons possess people and make them do bad things. That's great. However, while the writing is passable, the grammar is rather rough. The story's development feels like an odd mix between rushed and cliche, and can be hard to follow at times. While I understand this is a revenge story, and that the MC is supposed to be a villain, I don't quite see Damon as a villain. Sure, he's vengeful and brutal, but he lacks something, and I'm not quite sure what. I'll have to see more to give a proper answer. 2.6/5