Review Detail of Obskure in A Thousand Worlds

This had a chance at being a really great story, but the it's kinda mid. Mc is pretty edgy, though try's to come across as the cool bad boy, He is rubbing his chin non-stop for some reason, not kidding he should have not chin at this point, also he closes his eye's alot for some reason guess it's the edge lord thing to do. What made me drop it's they guy left Betty....... never abandon the loli. So after putting up with his stupid chin rubbing eye closing split personality crap, not to mention this is ment to be a chat group book with no chat group or the fact his got it and then never looked at it again for 30 odd chapters I can't go on.... ehh it has potential but the annoying crap just really wreaks it.