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Obskure

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  • Obskure
    Obskure9mth
    Commented

    Short filler chapters seem to becoming pretty common, malfoy being his guardian means nothing when he can mind control or kill him in seconds.

    Ch 149 The-Enemies-Who-Planned (VI)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
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  • Obskure
    Obskure9mth
    Commented

    Filler chapters in anime and manga are bad enough but can't stand them in fanfics.

    Ch 148 The-Enemies-Who-Planned (V)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
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  • Obskure
    Obskure11mth
    Commented

    His over the top paranoia is getting old, is he worried dumble will just kill him on the spot, ffs he give people who murder and %$#& 20 chances

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Solitude.
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    HP: Eagle Soars
    Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH
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  • Obskure
    Obskure11mth
    Commented

    So many stories already and now a another new one :(

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Commissioned by, Definitely not Dio
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    Myriad Apocalypse's
    Anime & Comics · Azazyel
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  • Obskure
    Obskure11mth
    Commented

    Almost feels like meeting Sirius the game and a small fight took up 30 chapters. And tbh not much has really happened might wait a few months too look back hope by then they might have got to hogworts. Might even be drawing the goblet by then.

    Ch 104 The-Way-He-Rolls (II)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
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  • Obskure
    Obskure11mth
    Commented

    God the chapters are short

    Ch 90 The-Little-Beetle-That-Could (I)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
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  • Obskure
    Obskure1yr
    Posted

    So much potential, instead we get depression and huge plot holes. I get not being able to talk would be hard and a huge adjustment but the level of angst for a supposed grown man is just terrible. He does not even train his voice just focus on not talking at all and getting his shit kicked in so as to never make a sound, full edgelord. Almost get captured by a normal human instead of you know using powers you have, so get caught most likely tortured turned into a weapon or use your powers, power mind you he has not trained cause you know angst and depression but thankfully saved at the last minute. From what other reviews have said you need 40+ chapter to get passed depression and 100 for anything to start, so much investment for maybe a good story. Good luck

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    DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Obskure
    Obskure1yr
    Posted

    This had a chance at being a really great story, but the it's kinda mid. Mc is pretty edgy, though try's to come across as the cool bad boy, He is rubbing his chin non-stop for some reason, not kidding he should have not chin at this point, also he closes his eye's alot for some reason guess it's the edge lord thing to do. What made me drop it's they guy left Betty....... never abandon the loli. So after putting up with his stupid chin rubbing eye closing split personality crap, not to mention this is ment to be a chat group book with no chat group or the fact his got it and then never looked at it again for 30 odd chapters I can't go on.... ehh it has potential but the annoying crap just really wreaks it.

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    A Thousand Worlds
    Anime & Comics · Dreizehnn
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  • Obskure
    Obskure3yr
    Replied to Einlion

    You will get over it I'm sure. And really all the comments you get are kids praising you like you have written the bible. You always seem to react defensive to any comments thats not 100% positive.

    Ch 1735 Proposition
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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Obskure
    Obskure3yr
    Replied to SickBlad

    Yeah it's a **** test, but the guy iced his best friend then another girl...... to get 1 lvl..... Now cause he regrets it he gets a boost and another chance. So guy drink drive smashes into kids..... well you seem sorry about how about some money and a nice job? I get fan boys get all simp over any one who is not drowning this writer with praise every comments but seemed pretty black and white too me.

    Ch 1735 Proposition
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    Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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