in cultivation type novel ..there is a difference in immortal cultivator and mortals..not only in strength..but also intelligences and thinking.a young cultivator thinking and intelligence exceed ordinary mortal of same age .this logic is missing in this novel. characters behave too childish mc portrayed as too dumb ..like he can not speak up is mind only complain in his head.he does not like attention.but in some scene he thinks why no body is looking at me?.. MC can comprehend every thing and any thing but first he need to compared how to talk is mind out. and a bit of intelligence FL character is too irritating ,brainless,very lustfully, its OK to portrait her as loli but there is limit to it. author need to be mature. story can be great if author can take care of certain thing while portraying the behavior of the characters. otherwise reader will lose interest .what is use if plot is powerful but character behave silly
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