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DKtheDaoist
DKtheDaoistLv112yr
2022-10-02 13:41

The logic behind this story is rather incoherent. The MC breaks through 5 stages of Qi cultivation in one day, then in another 3 days he breaks through 3 stages, then it takes him two months to breakthrough to the 9th stages of Qi cultivation? Like really? I know it's trying so much to make the MC the underdog but anyone who reads this and thinks it's okay should just go to the psych ward, something is probably wrong with their minds. Then there is the logic behind the sword cultivation as well, I mean it takes him one day to go from a clueless novice to achieving great sword intent, then he is expected to take one month to advance again? I mean the one about cultivation would have made more sense if he was practicing his swords techniques or alchemy but we are being given a load of mind reducing illogical chapters and we are supposed to make do with it? Web novel has really deteriorated in their choice of trial novels because this right here is a waste of time. Read at own risk.

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Asurah
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This is about as far as I got also before I gave up on this novel. Glad I wasn't the only one stuggling to comprehend the complete BS going on in this novel. 😭

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