Item: HIS CHOSEN MATE
Rating: 3.6
Author: Stormi_A

Stormi_ALv12yr

2022-07-24 20:10

I'm hooked right from the beginning of this chapter. I can almost picture Arianne in my mind with her red hair and coloured eyes, I can't wait to meet the ML of this story tho, I'm guessing it's the boy in the woods... Next chapter author, u doing great!

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DA_AloeraAuthor

Awww thanks Stormi, appreciate the love

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