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Review Detail of O_Vicente in NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft

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O_Vicente
O_VicenteLv11yrO_Vicente

The story is pretty interesting, although I did see some grammar mistakes also could you shorten the long paragraphs it was really difficult to read because of that overall novel is great!

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NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft

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Hi, Thanks for this review and I've taken everything you said into consideration and have put them to work.