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O_Vicente

O_Vicente

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2022-07-28 JoinedUnited States
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    These characters seem interesting

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    Yes! More Chapters, thank you!

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Replied to Ishaisa

    done

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    Translation: "Oliver, your sister, and I are going to the food market to stock up and buy other necessities."

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Replied to obiparadise_purity

    really?

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    Woah, the first chapter is great

    Ch 1 Young Dreams
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    I Bet My Heart On You
    Teen · Ishaisa
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Posted

    The story is quite interesting the uses of changing pov for characters are unique but I also got confused by it the character interactions feel so spot on and real, overall this novel is great Now

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    Beyond The Seas
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Replied to Derrrorr

    Oh ok, Thank you

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    Fantasy · O_Vicente
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Posted

    The story is pretty interesting, although I did see some grammar mistakes also could you shorten the long paragraphs it was really difficult to read because of that overall novel is great!

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    NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    Wow! that right there is dedication

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    NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    That's a lot of info...for me to remember

    Ch 2 Characters/Cast
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    NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Replied to obiparadise_purity

    your new book cover look so good..wow

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    lets go a new chapter :D

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    hehe

    Ch 2 Shaman Of The West Village
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    Red Blood Century
    Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Posted

    Damn I wished I had more power stones to vote T-T, The synopsis got me hooked, but at the end where it said "They faced a lot of difficulties because they were rivals." wouldn't that be obvious because in the beginning it stated that they were rivals so wouldn't be better to cut that part off "because they were rivals

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    oh looks like we have an amazonian

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    alright alright...

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    hello again haha

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Posted

    I actually really like this novel..I never been a guy to read romance so I thought I was going to hate this novel but wwow was i wrong haha

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  • O_Vicente
    O_Vicente1yr
    Commented

    Wow im first....nice

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