Good story but I don’t like the fact that the fact fact that the author has made the mc need a cane to walk properly so if you don’t mind that fact then it’s a pretty good read beside the occasional misspelling
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Honestly his leg injury is just an excuse for the mc to carry his halberd everywhere
A leg injury that severe would cause so many issues in combat and overall mobility anyway. If that's seriously why he has an injury, all i can say is you have disabled your own writing for future scenes of action.
bro they are in berk a viking village, strapping a weapon onto the back or just carrying a weapon isn't really uncommon,so why made the mc a cripple?
Are you fckng serious? Because if so, I don't want to imagine what kind of decisions you will make in the future. (Google translate)
… I’m glad I’ve dropped this but if you want to improve read some really good fanfic like cornbringers or something like that and see what they do and what makes readers want to read more and apply it to your fanfics and you might make a decent fanfic
Thats such a dumb reason, he's in a viking village for crying out loud why can't he just carry it while being healthy and not a cripple? yikes
While i find that reasoning pretty dumb i'll still give it a try since this is the first HTTYD fic ive ever come across.
Wait wait wait wait waaaait, you crippled your MC so that he had an excuse to carry a weapo….in a world that revolves around Vikings and dragons? Author are you ok?
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