Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra in Journey of a Blacksmith MAGNUM

This is most certainly one of the stories I've read. The writing itself is fine, and the grammar and such are all right for the most part. Dialogue is pretty weak at some points, but it gets the job done. My main issue with the story would actually be some of the content itself, and more in regards to some things that aren't exactly clear. For example, It's said that Octavius and Sexta are related, but at the end of chapter two, Sexta expresses interest in tappin with Octavius. Not to mention Octavius's aunt marrying his cousin. Author, is this incest? I'm legitimately confused. Regardless, the story could be well written with a few minor edits. 3/5