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Review Detail of Namasaya in When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

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enjoy the story for a while but after some time it began to feel like they forgot how the story started. Yes it's supposed to be a romance and yes it's supposed to be about him investing in his wife a little bit but when they first introduced a system he is supposed to be able to see the potential of all the people around him and it turned from being a potential of everyone around him to just giving money to his girlfriend willy nilly with no actual care about any of the industries that he was in because even when he started It was about being successful with his former admirer and his past life. Now I'm down to chapter 269 and we have name drops all over the place characterizing real life people from other countries as stupid rich men and solving every business problem by throwing money at them. Like I'm not saying he has to light low or nothing but you should at the very least try to disguise where your money's coming from secondly he's very slow to expand on his businesses so they can keep on just making money for him if that's what he wanted to do but he only seems to actually make any attempt to expand his business or do a proper investment in any of the people besides his girlfriend when something else happens that is on the verge of closing the company or he's thinking about oh how can I sell this so I can get more money for my system not regarding that he is made himself an integral part of said company ending out rely on him somewhat to just have money to throw at them. He doesn't appear very intelligent without the abilities given to him by the system every once in a while he gets a new like bonus card like to remind us that the system does still exist and whatnot but otherwise I'm not real impressed by how it's turned out. Even the romance is feeling like it's only there to emphasize Oh I give my girlfriend money to make money and now it's just oh I'm so young and I'm so rich and I'm so successful because I found money into a business I'm like so that's not role model material That's not something that other people can look at and be like oh yeah this is how we should be running our business The author is all over the place and it shows

When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

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