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kentaro88
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it's good at first when they're living their life as a novice business personalities while living as a good students as well. IT TASTED BITTER WHEN they have a competition against the amazon and jeff bezos himself. MENTIONING REAL LIFE COMPANY, REAL PERSON, AND PORTRAYED JEFF BEZOS as a petty and horrible character? what is this how Chinese makes their novel? where are the writing etiquettes? where are the codes and conducts of writing? what a bs author!

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When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

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Seamania
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In Faloo, the original author wrote only 199 chapters so far. The rest is added and edited by translator who made this novel become trash. Nothing making sense in this novel since translator decided to localize many ideas to make the novel longer.

Namasaya
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notice that they portray every major opponent of the main character like that too because they referenced that one previous senior of their school As a business genius but yet for some reason this business genus decides that he wants to compete with the milk tea shops and instead of starching somewhere away from the popular and well-known location he decides to start up like a hundred yards away from them in order to compete because the guy didn't take his investment. And then this guy decides that when he's not winning to continue throwing money into what is clearly a losing battle instead of sitting down and deciding to start someplace else that wouldn't be directly competed with this guy's company and yet I'm supposed to believe this is a genius. later on there's an investor who's invested into two sides of business who decides to side with bezos and betrayed a person he has invested a decent amount of money into because he's upset that the guy didn't take the investment of Amazon and an Amazon's out here throwing money into what looks to be a dead end and doing essentially corporate espionage openly I don't understand what this story is trying to accomplish anymore Like you can have a character be smart and not portray general regular business opponent as absolute idiots just to boost your character you know

gurpreet31
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...mission impossible for 99% of authors.

Namasaya:notice that they portray every major opponent of the main character like that too because they referenced that one previous senior of their school As a business genius but yet for some reason this business genus decides that he wants to compete with the milk tea shops and instead of starching somewhere away from the popular and well-known location he decides to start up like a hundred yards away from them in order to compete because the guy didn't take his investment. And then this guy decides that when he's not winning to continue throwing money into what is clearly a losing battle instead of sitting down and deciding to start someplace else that wouldn't be directly competed with this guy's company and yet I'm supposed to believe this is a genius. later on there's an investor who's invested into two sides of business who decides to side with bezos and betrayed a person he has invested a decent amount of money into because he's upset that the guy didn't take the investment of Amazon and an Amazon's out here throwing money into what looks to be a dead end and doing essentially corporate espionage openly I don't understand what this story is trying to accomplish anymore Like you can have a character be smart and not portray general regular business opponent as absolute idiots just to boost your character you know