I literally came here looking for this type of review because I wanted to know it wasn't just me who was struggling to get through these chapters. I greatly appreciate this review

yeah I feel like other people with this cheat would have lost their minds being stuck in the heavenly palace for hundreds of years trying to succeed in a single spell or cultivation technique

agreed I'm pretty sure that they would have been recruited by sects If they had third grade talent

The interesting thing now I don't know if it's a culture thing or not but a lot of times when you're reading these stories it seems that for commoners at leaastthe man gives his income to the woman and lets her manage the finances and stuff of the house so this feels like a reversal

interested so see this might be what gets me to stop reading it where I'm at. I'm at like chapter 26 and if it's going to stay in the way it is now all the way up to chapter 200 I probably should quit while I'm ahead

I get that they're not going to break through continuously but the way he's describing stuff is so ugly boring at least up to chapter 26 that it's going to be a hard stop for a lot of people I'm going to keep on getting through this or get to chapter 50 and see if it improves but if you are trying to entice readers with the first 20 or 30 chapters of your book say space out the explanations like you can't have them all crammed into the first few chapters people don't like to read exposition all the time

I think you're referencing when they say a single word multiple times like good good good versus when they're literally repeating the same explanation across various different chapters. they're not simultaneously being said the same time. like in this story up to chapter 26 I believe They have explained the different spirit root system at least four or five times now and pretty badly each time

The fact that they've done this like seven or eight times now is utterly frustrated and I can't tell if it's a situation where web novel is split in chapters and it's just happening to split these advertisement chapters sections perfectly in half or if the original writer really did like have people paying for their advertisements

honestly I'd also like to know what the world are talking about like adding in Lily has just completely confused the story

It could have been one of those situations where they said something else entirely probably more likely to have to do it to talisman's then the golden cicada method I don't think they even suspect he has it because of the fact that he never left his home during the time those ruins were being explored

I do not understand why they insist on using Western names in these types of stories especially when it's painfully clear that they're doing Chinese culture especially when they're doing traditional Chinese medicine. And then for them to use bad western names to top it all off Olga violet come on guys

This author is doing the absolute most to not make her a villain

this hole we help everybody think always seems to be so poorly fought out by these people luckily she is somewhat powerful enough to hold her own but it still feels kind of poorly thought out

her consistency on when she choose to put things in her space and when she doesn't is wild to me. I understand that beauty products are not necessary however she could use them for herself I understand that there are things that she doesn't need right now but she doesn't know she'll need him in the future and she refuses to pack things because she doesn't deem them important and it's strange to me that she doesn't seem to be considerate any kind of long-term at this point 18 years old or not. Like all she thinks about is food it feels like .

The thing is is that clearly the world is going to change this whole leave stuff forevers behind is ridiculous because the person who's behind him might just be a greedy businessman who will grab them and sell them for ridiculously high prices to people who will not share them with anybody else so this logic is inherently flawed and I don't know if it's like they're trying to show these guys are actually kids and naive or what

I'm pretty sure they don't have enough of a test to screen for nepotism literally both of their families are in the military higher ups types I can see them as long as they keep their stamina and skills up to date they don't have to be particularly intelligent

I'm not going to lie it's interesting to me that she seems to be so unmotivated but given the fact that she found out that her father had cheated on her mother the way she did you think she would have been motivated to do something with herself once she realized how much peril she would have been in even as a young kid you know you kind of pick up on that kind of nonsense so like she should at least been making some form of an escape plan

it's like the rider thinks we forget what she tells us every few chapters about that money being called coins but in a shape of bills for some asinine reason

same I'm sorry but I'm going to have a really hard time become in friends with somebody who tried to basically have me assaulted it's like she's completely forgotten about the fact that she worked with that other actor to try and get her in trouble with that investor

yeah he warned him about losing control because he had demonic qi from the sword not that he would lose control because of the bloodlines he had integrated