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2023-03-10 04:43

It’s interesting, but the repetition of conjunctions throws me off, they frequently go on tangents about exposition from a previous chapter, and the whole thing is a cultivation novel. I wanted to give this author a chance despite the obvious red flags to see if maybe I was reading too much into it but the author just writes like a 9-13 year old.

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