Shameless self review.. but here is just the authors words to those reading as I am asking for your patience and understanding. As you may or not be aware, this is just a side project of many side projects that I have ongoing at present. After writing the first draft, it will be uploaded in an unedited state in order to save time to write my other chapters for other books. The quality may be slightly lower and there may be the occasional mistake so I ask those that are more critical of mistakes and grammar to please be patient and give it a chance before judging so soon. If you have read any of my other novels then you should be already aware of my writing style and quirks as I tend to go into detail and hyper focus on certain points too much so I will apologise for that in advance? I have an original novel that I have to start up again soon, a fanfic that has eight releases of chapters per week, another fanfic that has two releases a week and then this project too that has three to four a week so I do not have time for proofreading and editing my works before uploading them. If I do so then the releases will become much less as most of my time will be spent on correcting mistakes, it is a question of what the audience would prefer in the end.. would they prefer high quality with one or two chapters that are released late or not at all each week.. or would you prefer a regular upload schedule to be kept while ocasionally spotting a minor error?

Pretty great all around, the only really thing holding it back for me is it has a female lead. That's just my personal opinion though. Keep up the great work Author-Sama!

It is readable and may even have a story somewhere down the line, but I don't have the patience to wait for that. 16 chapters in and this story has gone nowhere. A more talented author could probably take everything written so far and condense it into a single chapter. Yes, this story is still on chapter 1 as far as I am concerned. The character interactions also remind me of interactions between medically retrded people.

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This feels more like a novel than a fanfic. Basically everything about this is good. The start of the fic is quite slow but develops at a nice pace. Updates are a bit over the place but its fine. I saw that this fic doesn't have many reviews, so I decided to add this one to the pile. Just a question for the author. Is there going to be any romance or nah?

Good fic

The story developed in a good way to me the characters and mc are well written and does not contain that heram thing most novel and anime have so I like it very much would like to see the story develop more in the future.

It’s interesting, but the repetition of conjunctions throws me off, they frequently go on tangents about exposition from a previous chapter, and the whole thing is a cultivation novel. I wanted to give this author a chance despite the obvious red flags to see if maybe I was reading too much into it but the author just writes like a 9-13 year old.

Some chineese furry fic. Lang is good but it spoiled a lot by the clichiest chineese young masters and sect atmosphere you can ever see

I feel like the story is a tad slow and doesn’t embrace the onepiece power system fully, which is honestly a shame as it is difficult to tell of how strong a character is.