Review Detail of ZoneTail in One Piece: Adventure of Leo

Item: One Piece: Adventure of Leo
Rating: 4

Review detail

ZoneTailLv41yrZoneTail

- Writing Quality------------✪✪✪XX - need more work and pls increase your word count. - Stability of Update--------✪✪✪✪✪ - Story Development-------✪✪XXX - 14chs so far and we have nothing. 90% system info.(self estimate) and 10% story. - Character Design---------✪✪✪✪✪ - World Background-------✪✪✪✪✪

One Piece: Adventure of Leo

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Hit30AuthorHit30

thank for review and don't worry because from chapter 15 story will move forward at a good pace and system will also be less as I have said in Ch 14 it was the last big information dump about system.😉 again thank for a useful review because they are rare most of the guys just give review base on choose of power.☺️

1yr

Z_RilLv13Z_Ril

tbh Black pearl with modern interior design doesn't go well together.

1yr

ZoneTailLv4ZoneTail

yea I thought so too. he overdid it.(and also the speed)

Z_Ril:tbh Black pearl with modern interior design doesn't go well together.

1yr