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it started good, but is to soon for relax, if i learn aything reading the pancakewitch novel is that start good dosen't mean stay good, remeber of make powerfull enough just to pass the immediate danger with a bit of trouble, if everithyng goes too smooth get boring, don't give too many powers becouse if theres much get confuse and easy of make plot-holes Now

A a fellow dragon novel writer i wholeheartedly recommend this novel, it mixes a lot of fun elements from MMORPG novels into Isekai and monster reincarnation ones. Don't be intimidated if the mc is not THAT impressive at the beginning, the growth is constant and as of the latest chapters, he's already really OP. Also I have noticed the author's gradual improvement on his writing quality, good job.

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The story is completely fine I just didn’t like the way things played out in some chapter in the late thirties. It may be completely fine for some readers, and it may get better just a few chapters later. What happened just left my brain to disappointed to stay interested in the story. Once again this story may be great, and I’m just being petty over little things. Keep up the great work aurthor as I may come back and continue reading just a few days from now. For now though ✌️

Fking trashcan story and trashcan author makes himself sound smart with a huge thought process behind every decision of the MC, but it’s stupid arguments that still end up coming to the wrong conclusion, super forced plots making MC do increasingly dumber things making his future more difficult, consistent errors in grammar that the author has acknowledged in comments but said he won’t fix because he likes them. Errors in what exactly the subspecies of dragons are OR the stupidity of players and NOCs alike to say “this is a Wyrm” (which has no legs or wings) while staring directly at a dragon with 4 legs and 2 wings.

the aspect ratio of the novel: 60% fights described in excruciating details and every single level up and mobs 35% fillers, very boring, Mostly the MC fighting mobs or expermanting 5% story ( I am being generous ) and the novel is so devoid of dialogue that I missed it honestly I think the authors should take a break and plan the story rather then fill it with fillers( the author said so ) he keeps introducing interesting characters without utilising them or saving them for the future And describing in details every mob fight is frustrating 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😡😡😡

Okay so as of me writing my review, there’s currently only 13 chapters. So it’s still in it’s early stages, but so far everything is going great. The only real thing that the author might want to work on is their grammar, it’s not bad to the point were you can’t understand what’s going on. But it would help the flow of the story. Like I said nothing really big, just one tiny thing that the author could work on. But other then it’s a great read. And now it’s to the good parts of the story. Which the first being the pacing. Which so far isn’t to fast, but neither is it to slow. Second would be that the mc isn’t overpowered but is neither weak either. Which the first major battle being a great demonstration to what I mean (goblin chief). Thirdly there’s the background, which while it may not be anything new, it’s so far doing a great job on expanding the world building bit by bit. Like I said it’s still a new novel as of me writing my review, but so far it’s great. So keep up the great work author :)