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JoaoV4SM
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2022-07-11 09:57

it started good, but is to soon for relax, if i learn aything reading the pancakewitch novel is that start good dosen't mean stay good, remeber of make powerfull enough just to pass the immediate danger with a bit of trouble, if everithyng goes too smooth get boring, don't give too many powers becouse if theres much get confuse and easy of make plot-holes Now

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AnonymUser
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Don't worry. I am not planning to add a plethora of weird powers that will get forgotten or nerfed to the ground in the next chapter because they were too op. MC is a dragon, so I will keep with a set of dragon abilities.

TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

You almost perfectly described Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse 😆 Not necessarily nerfed but the whole story has insane literal billions of abilities unused by the mc and so many of them are forgotten for a long time or forever! If it's not simply forgotten then it's intentionally ignored to q degree to not make the mc literally wipe out all potential enemies in 3 chapters...

AnonymUser:Don't worry. I am not planning to add a plethora of weird powers that will get forgotten or nerfed to the ground in the next chapter because they were too op. MC is a dragon, so I will keep with a set of dragon abilities.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Will he stay full time dragon or is he gonna go full idiot by turning into a human?

AnonymUser:Don't worry. I am not planning to add a plethora of weird powers that will get forgotten or nerfed to the ground in the next chapter because they were too op. MC is a dragon, so I will keep with a set of dragon abilities.
AnonymUser
AnonymUserAuthor

He will stay dragon.

UndeadBeing:Will he stay full time dragon or is he gonna go full idiot by turning into a human?
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