Review Detail of Arathes in THE CEO AND HIS LITTLE ANGEL

I’m no expert on romance novels but this doesn't seem to be a unique take on anything, just a spinoff of the classic married to the rich guy, which isn't a problem if it were good or at least stood out from the other generic spinoffs, but at best, I can say this novel is just okay. You can definitely tell that English isn’t the author’s first language. I read the first few chapters and skimmed through the remaining chapters, and it doesn’t get any better. It all feels boring and stale, to the point where there would be no reason for potential readers to spend their time reading your novel over the masses of romance stories written by tried-and-true authors. I encourage the author to read some top tier romance novels to get ideas and inspiration and to improve grammar in order to up the quality of this story. There’s certainly nothing wrong with going back and editing chapters to improve the quality and readability as long as you don't completely butcher the previous storyline.