Review Detail of HadesOnDrugs in Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure

An oversmart dog barking at me(no offence)that's what this whole fics writing felt like. I don't understand the phrase u use, feels a bit too complicated and hard to understand may that's because of my ignorance but still I think u should use simple language and not to complicate things. The story is good though.