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HadesOnDrugs
HadesOnDrugsLv32yr
2022-07-18 21:45

An oversmart dog barking at me(no offence)that's what this whole fics writing felt like. I don't understand the phrase u use, feels a bit too complicated and hard to understand may that's because of my ignorance but still I think u should use simple language and not to complicate things. The story is good though.

Zabuza's Waifu Adventure

JManM
4.9
30 Chs

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The_ReadingOne
The_ReadingOneLv4

There is no need for me to read it to give this book full marks because the writer is very talented in book making and if you have read any of his other works then you know what I'm talking about this guy is a genius go read some of his other books you won't be disappointed

2yr

Kami12
Kami12Lv6

This quite literally the greatest story I have read so far on this app/site. As the Kami I order you to read it. I also hope the author keeps up the good work.👍👍👍👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😤😤😤

2yr
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

and my man strikes once again. I had a suspicion once your Invincible fic started slowing down. I knew you too well that it mean my man is either having a vacation with his family or there's a new face in town

2yr
ravhage
ravhageLv4

I LOVE THIS. let it be said that your humor is the greatest expression of idontgiveash*tery found on this website and I LOVE IT!

2yr
nwonknuresu
nwonknuresuLv4

Bro 5/5 all the way this had me laughing so hard i was crying just hope to see more, this is what i read fanfics for keep up the good work.

2yr
THOTSLAYER
THOTSLAYERLv4

Did you delete your discord? And are you going to still update your fics?mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmMMmMmmmmMMmMmMmMM mmMMmMMmM

2yr
RavenClock
RavenClockLv4

Great story overall Would have love to let it stock pile but can't resist I suggest this story for everyone 140 characters is a lot. .........

2yr
ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

Definitely worth a try! 5/5 for all. It is a more realistic take on the Naruto world. Keep up the good work Author!

2yr
Faranade
FaranadeLv14

Great story, man hasn't written a poor story so far. Even his first story, the Jaune SI one, was pretty good if a little short. (I dont know if that's actually his first story)

2yr
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