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Why does every character sound like they're Shakespeare......it's like I'm reading the script of a play.
I really want him to do that homelander speech infront of the crowd..... Like "...you guys should be thanking christ that I am who and what I am because you need me.... You need me to save you, because......I am the only one who possibly CAN."
Cursed spirit manipulaion is too busted...... I would recommend something like the 10 shadows type...... He will summon the beasts rinnegan could summon but as shikigami
With how well u are writing this story it would be a massive shame if you didn't explore the heian era as an arc......... 👀
Six eyes control of cursed energy allows gojo to have infinite cursed energy, his regeneration of cursed energy far exceeds his output..... So it's a bit unrealistic that he is running out of cursed energy as MC said in the chapter...... He might be tired but never be out of cursed energy.
Was that an NF reference in the middle👀...... The mind is a powerful place and what you feed it can affect you in a powerful way.
I was bloody fuckn right
Romance feels a bit like plastic and very unnatural/forced ...... 💀
"If garbage can compete with you.... Imagine what perfect will do.. " Straight up 🔥🔥