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DonutLuver
DonutLuverLv12yr
2022-07-14 22:28

the first chapter was a great hook and sucks you in right away. The prose is varied and interesting so it's enjoyable to read. I love Jack as he is a relatable character. the first two chapter also balances character development and world building and the readers can anticipate a wild adventure is ahead for young Jack.

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Shadow_Magus
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Thank you sooooo much!!!

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