DonutLuver

Wow what a string start. I love time travel stories but it's seldom to find a good time travelling story. This starts off with such an emotional punch. The longing and the love of the couple is strong and it really hits you right in the feels. Being able to travel back in time and being able to right all the wrong of your regret is what many people often think about- the fact that MC has a chance I'm excited to see the drama and the reunion of her main love in this story!

Wow! This is interesting. I rarely see a story where a character does a major time jump like this!

Starting the story by breaking my heart, very nice 🥲🥲🥲

ehehehe 😉😉

oh thank you! 😍😍😍

action is win 🏆

thank you so much for the kind review 😍😍😍😍😍 there is a reason why the FL did not know about the vampire queen and it shall be revealed in due course - but until then ... we shall see ~~ I'm glad you like the scene between the villagers and FL. in the face of death - people could be "selfish and cruel" BUT they never went through with hurting her 🥲

haha you're review made me laugh. the FML starts out weak than strong - but yea - she is pretty strong only cuz she's a vampire and not a human haha

the first chapter was a great hook and sucks you in right away. The prose is varied and interesting so it's enjoyable to read. I love Jack as he is a relatable character. the first two chapter also balances character development and world building and the readers can anticipate a wild adventure is ahead for young Jack.