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Rin_NurniaLv42yr
2022-07-08 00:09

The first chapter give off mysterious vibe because both MC and me as reader, have no clue what's actually going on but one thing I'm going to point out is that you must be mistaken 'sweat' for 'sweet voice'. It's alright, we can learn from mistakes and I'm sure you will improve one day. Don't give up👍🏻

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thanx for pointing the mistake and I'll improve my writing as I update 😉

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