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RebeccaJWW
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2024-08-11 08:14

I loved the first 150ish chapters. The interactions with the family was gold. Then the more intrigue and world building became prevalent and the MC and ML were spending lots of time in the capital city and the kids and family and almost forgotten. Occasionally MC will mention she misses them. Something incredibly annoying and weird then happened. between ch 280 and 300, the chapters are all messed up. The order is not right. There is no mention of time jumps back and forth. However, things happen at strange times and one minute they are in a cave, the next they are in the city at a festival. It's like they were uploaded in the wrong order. Some things mentioned get resolved and I don't know how. I haven't finished this story yet. So not sure if the mix up continues.

A Military Doctor Became a Stepmom in Ancient Times

Mountain Springs
4.4
575 Chs

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huahua
huahuaLv14

Hopefully not a r*pe! Honestly looking forward to the story. If anyone knows any raws or spoilers with regards to eventual r*pe, you're welkome to let me know. Also, i realllyyyy want the raws 😇

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Immortal_Goddess
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Looking forward to reading this. Anyone has the raws?😇🙏🏻 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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WhiteNinja
WhiteNinjaLv15

Please let this book be picked !! From the characters to the story background it has a nice developme and the family is just so wholesome and cute ! It’s a nice and pleasant read too.

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Tania_kumari
Tania_kumariLv4

looking forward for it to get picked and update more chapter of it 🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗 do tell if anyone has raw of it 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

2yr
bluebird1604
bluebird1604Lv6

I keep having this feeling like "read the book without processing in my brain" seriously it is fine to have space and unlimited supply what is that with electricity? do u guys think it comes out of nothing 🤔ML can eat in her space 😳 she can continue eating and drinking in space itself why are u even out just be there itself ML does not work much and she only heal the emperor and gets all support there is not much logic totally waste of time I like first few chapers concept of reincarnation and mother of twins but other than that nothing interests me

2yr
HirsuiteGremlin27
HirsuiteGremlin27Lv15

hopefully it gets picked. synopsis is very interesting.. looking forward to reading .................hmm now what? why the heck is their a min of words to be posted.. how frustrating. guess this is enough now lol

2yr
Kitty2Coven
Kitty2CovenLv15

Good read!!!

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riddhi313
riddhi313Lv4

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Reveal spoiler

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