Honnestly it's a good story, the mc is fine af, not OP in useless way, he don't let himself be bullied or try to act pig to eat the tiger, the writing quality can be improved but i really like it, the only think i hate is the other character POV(especially femal) it's cringe bro, childish and gross.. sorry bro
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LIKEim a bit baffled to be honest, for me the writing is extremely sloppy to the point its changing from time to time there is so many wrong punctuation and what irk me is the amount of word that feels so wrong in many different occasions, i just cant help it. I thought you said that "the writing could be improved" that really got me sorry man for the author and u its not for me, like i could read mtl and try to make it right but this nope, besides i dont find anything worth my time in this book cheers author [img=recommend] try AI paraphrase or grammarly smtn like that i guarantee you work's would be one of the best fanfiction in this platform i hope you rewriting it to be honest. cause this story is for you lot who wants to enjoy and relax then get little bit of action im stopping on ch20 btw so yea Goodluck author