Item: Selling to the Warhammer 40k universe
Rating: 2.6
Author: EchoingDusk

EchoingDuskLv31yr

2023-12-31 01:55

Burn the Heretic! Kill the Mutant! Purge the Unclean!

Selling to the Warhammer 40k universe

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W4ND3R1N6_R34D3RLv4

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BeziikLv14

Sufficient but not good enough. It seems you start from the assumption that the reader knows about 40k. This is bad in many different aspects. You didn't spend time to present is the MC, you didn't spend time to establish the world, how the system functions ... you just throw in random situations that this guy is completely fine going along with out of nowhere and then dump some random information about unrelated events that played some part in history but do not have more than a historical tie into the present instances, info dumping for short. Work more on these points, at least make the guy discover more of the world along with us. Making it ignorant is annoying but having him explain random stuff for no reason makes 0 sense

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SugunteseLv4

It has actually a very good premise and i would expect for more from author it has a great start and it is rare to find someone do a warhammer40K fanfic

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CleversonBonassiLv4

8chs and for now is very interesting! need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words, need more words,

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America_YeaLv3

This one mixes a cultivating trash world(not that I think cultivating is itself bad it'sjust done poorly here) with warhammer 40k and it just doesn't fit well together how it's done here. Honestly I expected better from a warhammer fan because it might work fairly well but the cultivation isn't even done right. That stuff is supposed to be used to give the mc a plot excuse to go exploring for resources and that mystical ginsing that's buried in some young master's great great great grandfather's tomb or wherever else the mc needs to go to get stuff like a flying sword. here, instead it's all the bad tropes with everything handed to the mc on a silver platter as far as the cultivating goes which completely defeats the purpose and just turns things into a sausage measuring contest on that side.

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ZombiedreadLv4

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md_hemi196Lv1

keep it up.Good read so far .it my first war hammer fin novel read and it have protencel .And plz do not make mc super op quick it make BORING.. also it a war hammer novel where political is a thing don't forget this.good read 4.5*

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does anybody know where the pirate this and also if it's been finished on top of that what happened to the author

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