Item: Selling to the Warhammer 40k universe
Rating: 2
Author: Zombiedread

ZombiedreadLv41yr

2023-01-21 10:49

I have no idea what’ going on in this story, it’s turned Into cultivation for some reason and he’s not on earth or our earth or something Idk so confusing, read if u want to, but I just can’t understand the story. Great idea, storyline needs a lot of work

Selling to the Warhammer 40k universe

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