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WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv11yrWorthyAdversary

So, first off, this is an amazing novel for the story, just wanted to get that out. Now, onto the real stuff, first is writing quality, which, honestly, is a little bit subpar compared to other novels on Webnovel. Like, there are just a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that can just be fixed with a quick proofread or by putting it into an AI, and I think that this just really takes away from the experience. So, I had to give this a 3 star, just cause I'm such a stickler for grammar. Second is the stability of updates, which I think is just okay. The author updates about once every two days and recently went on a big break, and well, this obviously isn't a good thing if you want to get favored by the Webnovel algorithm. So, yeah, a solid 4. Now, onto the things that are exceptional. First is the story development, which I think, is just, absolutely freaking amazing. Like, the pacing is great and it keeps you scrolling. And, the author does end on cliffhangers, but they're never too harsh, making it so that we don't hate the author every time a chapter is published. It's a pretty good psychological model that the author is writing on. Now, onto the second exceptional part about this novel, and that's the character design. It's really nice to see a novel have characters that feel extremely realistic, and also, each character has their own design, and that just makes it seem like the real world. The MC is also exceptional, with the fact that he's a mentalist, it's extremely hard to write his character and his actions and make them believable, but somehow, the author was able to successfully do it. An amazing job author! Finally is the world background, which is a solid 4 stars right now. This is due to the fact that it's a really generic world right now and there hasn't been any uniqueness in the world yet. I'll be waiting for your added uniqueness author. Overall, a novel that I would definitely recommend to another reader as a novel that is currently rising. Good work author and continue writing (cause I'm waiting...)!

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Nosane
NosaneAuthorNosane

I really appreciate such an honest and thorough review. Now talking about the content. Well, I guess I suck at grammar. But that's something obvious since I am a novice writer and this is my first story. And if we talk about stability... well... I will try to post a chapter every day, was on a break due to exams. Moving on to the world-building, to be honest, I am not quite good at it, but would definitely love to add uniqueness to the story, an element that is only mine. Thanks for the review~

WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv1WorthyAdversary

No problem. Just a question, do you want a free editor? I edit novels for free just because I want to see good novels have better grammar. I can also give you my CV if you want it to check if I'm being real or not. Just dm me on discord if you do want my CV or if you wanna accept. Discord: WorthyAdversary#3336

Nosane:I really appreciate such an honest and thorough review. Now talking about the content. Well, I guess I suck at grammar. But that's something obvious since I am a novice writer and this is my first story. And if we talk about stability... well... I will try to post a chapter every day, was on a break due to exams. Moving on to the world-building, to be honest, I am not quite good at it, but would definitely love to add uniqueness to the story, an element that is only mine. Thanks for the review~
Nosane
NosaneAuthorNosane

Oh! That would be great. I will add you on discord and don't worry I believe in you. But first I need to download Discord, I deleted it some ago. So I will contact you tomorrow.

WorthyAdversary:No problem. Just a question, do you want a free editor? I edit novels for free just because I want to see good novels have better grammar. I can also give you my CV if you want it to check if I'm being real or not. Just dm me on discord if you do want my CV or if you wanna accept. Discord: WorthyAdversary#3336
WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv1WorthyAdversary

Alright, nice!

Nosane:Oh! That would be great. I will add you on discord and don't worry I believe in you. But first I need to download Discord, I deleted it some ago. So I will contact you tomorrow.
Nosane
NosaneAuthorNosane

Hey, I have send a friend request to you, do accept it.

WorthyAdversary:Alright, nice!