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While the world itself is interesting, yhe main problem is the MC. He received the system prior to arriving in the new world and when he was transferred, he already has the benefits so he is pretty steam rolling thtough anything. This could still have been interesting but you pretty much skipped his early life in the new world and just summarized everything. Its pretty boring as it would have been interesting if he received the system in the new world so he qas actually growing in character.