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Idk if it just my preference and it probably might be but I just don’t like how the character is like out of no way a girl comes up and talked to him then they became friends, then she says a bad word and he says “language” like is the mc supposed to be what exactly. someone can know where this story is going from just the girl talking to him in the first place. It either shes a girl that brags and uses her family power act on the weak or think of them as inferior or she’s one that is annoying little girl thats become so called “friends” with the mc which later on turns into something serious. I hate the mc character, he’s 2 nice and a mc that oh u hurt my friends then u must die or some shit like that. “You have shown your power, so it my turn to show mine” that is just weird and cringe. Like they just met and he considered her his friend?? Someone that was lonely in his past life should not trust ppl this easily. I rest my case here, it a good story but sadly I will be stopping at 26 I think and won’t be reading it again.

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Ascension of Ancient king

Emmanuel_Peter203

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Emmanuel_Peter203
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Thanks for the comment. Am still a newbie writer so am not perfect but I really appreciate your feedback.

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Thanks for the feedback. Will try to improve on the MC in the next chapters.