So the mc js gon be babysitting a girl ?

What’s the point of all this story’s like where’s the mc at?? Been lost since and I’m tryna catch up but I’m not understanding what’s going on.

Why is the mc acting like a child of he’s a grown adult inside ? “Scratching his head(sorry) (tch) (ahaha)” This ngl stopped me from reading further. The mc character is not looking good so far.

No way you tryna make Damon care now after all he’s been thru, dis js makes the book non readable fr to be atleast.

Why are you introducing this girl and her background??

Nd u r?

All for now, Good job soldier!

So we are not gonna say anything about your trying to copy other ppl work?? Tho the difference is that you changed a few things. Already read the original novel and it way better than this. Hopefully you don’t get sued for copyrights.

Idk if it just my preference and it probably might be but I just don’t like how the character is like out of no way a girl comes up and talked to him then they became friends, then she says a bad word and he says “language” like is the mc supposed to be what exactly. someone can know where this story is going from just the girl talking to him in the first place. It either shes a girl that brags and uses her family power act on the weak or think of them as inferior or she’s one that is annoying little girl thats become so called “friends” with the mc which later on turns into something serious. I hate the mc character, he’s 2 nice and a mc that oh u hurt my friends then u must die or some shit like that. “You have shown your power, so it my turn to show mine” that is just weird and cringe. Like they just met and he considered her his friend?? Someone that was lonely in his past life should not trust ppl this easily. I rest my case here, it a good story but sadly I will be stopping at 26 I think and won’t be reading it again.

I wanted it to be with iris

We r still waiting lol

Allison!!!!! If you do like Allison then you’re weird. But hopefully it Allison or I won’t finish this fanfic

ALLISON!!!!!!!!

Nah this story is…. Why would you put the god ruins YOU brought up in chapter 4 or 5 and then do basically a timeskip to 30 sum chapters before talking about it like what kind of novels is this? If you were gonna make the Mc cold and ruthless then why make him have affection, stick to one story line or plot so this shit won’t be confusing.

Nah, I hate this type of novels. Made a promise and then Tim for awakening and he awakens nothing or sim f trash shit. Then he either dies or get betrayed or sum shit like that then he gets a system. Like why can’t he be strong from the beginning? What’s stopping him? Why is he different? Why can’t he be normal like everyone else? Just the same novels I see everyday.

you have to pay us back with some good action😤😌

me and you lol, I hope he goes back and destroy the royals also can you make him like a cold mean king of guy that barely talks and just do his own thing(my imagination lol).

I'm pretty sure he can but heh.

love this novel and I hope you keep bringing more chapters but can you like time skip to when he's done with his training, a few years or months?

Uhh... idk what to say, at first when someone told me to read this fic I was like sure and I did tho I only ready the forst chapter and decided to drop it. I'm a Christian so when u put the Mc name as Jesus I was like ya I'm not reading this, don't get offended or anything but I just can't. I put this rating because I haven't read the book and won't be reading it. MY OPINION SOME PEOPLE LIKE THIS FIC SO DON'T DROP IT, IF CAN CHANGE THE MC NAME THEN I MIGHT RECONSIDER READING IT BUT FOR NOW IM OUT.