Wow I don't know who the is guy who wrote this, but keep it up, you are my hero!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Alright, I dont usually write reviews, infact this is the very first Ill do in webnovel. First off Ill begin with this story begins before canon events, meaning most of the current story is made up by author, using HxH elements. Not only that, it has a very unique hatsu, which is personally a plus. For the actual Review: Writing quality: You rarely see errors, most that happen are minor ones and Ive only seen 2 major ones. The way the author structures sentences is also better than most of webnovel. As for world background, its literally HxH, a solid 5. For story development: Its too early to tell, Im leaving a 5 stars for now, however the current story is picking up, so this may change. Character Design: Also cant tell for now, this may change. However the MCs personality and hatsu are pretty nice. Updating stability: Personally a 3.8-ish. The author uploaded every half week, but as of newest chapter that might change. I definetly recommend this fic over most other stuff in webnovel, even if it has few chapters.

I don't know whether to say that it is a good ff of hxh, its power is interesting, but the last bows have left much to be desired... I doubt very much that I will continue reading more if it continues as the last short bow that he did.

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author bribed me to review this story ...................................................................................................................................................

wq- 4 some grammar mistakes here and there, still very good compared to webnovel standards. sou-3- had a month long hiatus so... sd- 4- too early to tell i guess wb- 5- its hxh what dya expect.

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the plot story was good at first,but in the middle it got messed up you know. why is the story was so random and messy with following events. and the following sentences is so hard to digest without deep knowledge in english literature. random events, random conversations, don't have connections with the following sentences. and you just still processing what the conversations all about but it got skip to the next situations. hays life is so hard nowadays.

great story....and nice detail on his nen ability