Alright, I dont usually write reviews, infact this is the very first Ill do in webnovel. First off Ill begin with this story begins before canon events, meaning most of the current story is made up by author, using HxH elements. Not only that, it has a very unique hatsu, which is personally a plus. For the actual Review: Writing quality: You rarely see errors, most that happen are minor ones and Ive only seen 2 major ones. The way the author structures sentences is also better than most of webnovel. As for world background, its literally HxH, a solid 5. For story development: Its too early to tell, Im leaving a 5 stars for now, however the current story is picking up, so this may change. Character Design: Also cant tell for now, this may change. However the MCs personality and hatsu are pretty nice. Updating stability: Personally a 3.8-ish. The author uploaded every half week, but as of newest chapter that might change. I definetly recommend this fic over most other stuff in webnovel, even if it has few chapters.
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Thanks for the review, I swear I won't let you be disappointed in the later plot of the story.
