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LordDaoThief
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2022-08-14 01:17

I wouldn’t usually give 5 stars to everything when review but the quality I most definitely enjoy, the updates couldn’t be any more stable then what they are now, it could be more yes but once people start doing more especially after getting contracted they tend to burn out. I’m happy with getting something everyday so thats why I gave this a 5 rating. I gave the story development 5 because I like how things are turning out so far, with out giving or trying not to give spoilers, let’s just say we know the some paths for the future already concerning the game, the real world, and the asteroid(im ending her so read to find out more) but I also gave it a 5 because it’s not predictable I know those 3 things will definitely be important later but I don’t know why yet so it draws you in with thinking(for me what would I do if I was in the situation) the character design I gave a 5 because at first I was like who can this MC get passed his innate defects, will spoiler his innate talents and the 3 things I mentioned earlier. And it’s still early enough that we are meeting others coming to know more about them as story goes(it’s not just stable in updates but the rate of development in my opinion) lastly background is a 5 because again we have the info but we don’t know the reasons for everything we are giving enough to speculate and comeback for more. Give it a shot if you don’t like it at least try to get to the part after he was forced to do a certain thing as thats in my opinion when every thing starts to pick up the true development because that moment leads to other pivotal ones we’ve gotten so far. Thank you for reading this far TLDR? It’s stable the main character is flesh out and though it’s still early we use budding side characters or supporting characters that could be vital. story moves at a moderate pacing giving you the world background of the world the characters and how everything came to be at the current point in story doing a good job to further help boost its development. All in all you get the info but it’s don just right that there’s still mystery and allure to drag you in

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LordDaoThief
LordDaoThiefLv15

Oh btw there is real world development as well not just game but I kinda hinted at this earlier with one of the 3 spoilers but there’s still other things going on as well ik the real world that I’m enjoying

The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Aha, thank you for the long review, it really energises me to write some chapters before sleeping. Hopefully, I write something that will give you very good food for thoughts novel.

LordDaoThief
LordDaoThiefLv15

I’m with cause some times I save up chapters to binge I might partake in devils lettuce and then it’s like I’m a detective, i try to piece together things likely to occur and I definitely try to go big brain sometimes 🤣 but I’m here for I definitely enjoy the story

The_Celestial_King:Aha, thank you for the long review, it really energises me to write some chapters before sleeping. Hopefully, I write something that will give you very good food for thoughts novel.
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Haha, thanks. readers with brains are the best but they also made writers watch out because they can spot plot holes easily!

LordDaoThief:I’m with cause some times I save up chapters to binge I might partake in devils lettuce and then it’s like I’m a detective, i try to piece together things likely to occur and I definitely try to go big brain sometimes 🤣 but I’m here for I definitely enjoy the story
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