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The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor2yr
2022-07-16 04:43

Shameless review and 5 stars, I have been pregnant with this story for some time now, and for that I know it will be amazing and unique read for any one that was lucky to stumbled upon it. The Novel tell the story of Seth Enoch, a boy with below average Constitution, and due to that abnormal body of his, in slight fatigue he will lose consciousness or even went to coma. What else will that poor guy do with his life apart of Gaming Vr Games that don't require his physical cooperation. And he became good at it, until an accident happened which his mother banned him from playing. Years later another game was introduced but special and have no apparent imperfection. Seth dived again. Seth confirmed the game unusual and mysterious feel and for many reason he believed that they were not diving in game but rather their mind was being transported to another world and for that he assumed that he can copy their technology to his World or even used something to invoke beyond natural phenomena. He went on a Quest of his own to prove or disprove his assumption while also trying to brought their technology to his World. _____ The MC is smart, genius even. But it was not all about winning, he fail to win better prizes and his handicap will hindered him a lot in game and real life but he will use his head to find solutions. ***** Regarding whether the game is another world or not, read the novel and found out. You will not be disappointed!

Temporal Pearls

The_Celestial_King
4.0
396 Chs

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Leo_Micado
Leo_MicadoLv13

I'll give it a try, you haven't failed me yet.

2yr
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Leo_Micado
Leo_MicadoLv13

Is this a sequel to the lost asteroid? or are they related in any way?

2yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

it's standalone novel

Leo_Micado:Is this a sequel to the lost asteroid? or are they related in any way?
2yr
Leo_Micado
Leo_MicadoLv13

cool

The_Celestial_King:it's standalone novel
2yr
SK33ZER9
SK33ZER9Lv15

Will he have like a werewolf power like the cover suggests?

2yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

No. that is his Reborn Wolf! in a way his child.

SK33ZER9:Will he have like a werewolf power like the cover suggests?
2yr
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SK33ZER9
SK33ZER9Lv15

What will be his abilities? Mc I mean

The_Celestial_King:No. that is his Reborn Wolf! in a way his child.
2yr
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The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Ability to extract bloodlines, and traits from other creatures. Because of his weak constitution, he can't have any bloodlines but he can use Traits that will be part of him. they are Weaker than bloodlines but without the side effects of the bloodlines. There will be other skills aparts from the one. This is a spoiler and any more than this will be too much of a spoiler. B

SK33ZER9:What will be his abilities? Mc I mean
2yr
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SK33ZER9
SK33ZER9Lv15

Answer or don’t but since he’s absorbing traits will he turn into a monster or some type of creature?

The_Celestial_King:Ability to extract bloodlines, and traits from other creatures. Because of his weak constitution, he can't have any bloodlines but he can use Traits that will be part of him. they are Weaker than bloodlines but without the side effects of the bloodlines. There will be other skills aparts from the one. This is a spoiler and any more than this will be too much of a spoiler. B
2yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Ahhh, spoilers

SK33ZER9:Answer or don’t but since he’s absorbing traits will he turn into a monster or some type of creature?
2yr
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Tommyshelby
TommyshelbyLv14

OK is these harem

The_Celestial_King:Ahhh, spoilers
2yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Nope

Tommyshelby:OK is these harem
2yr
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ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

Romance?

2yr
Taejin_Shen108
Taejin_Shen108Lv13

did he have pets?

1yr
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

The_Celestial_King:Nope
1yr
Voidz_Zero
Voidz_ZeroLv14

Whats with the grammar mistakes?

1yr
PatrioticZ
PatrioticZLv15

you busy or something?

1yr
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The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Life is tough, but in a day or two, a chapter will come.

PatrioticZ:you busy or something?
1yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Well, I'm not that good with English and I can't afford a good proofreader. But I have some grammar fixing apps now, I'm trying to use them.

Voidz_Zero:Whats with the grammar mistakes?
1yr
The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Yes.

Taejin_Shen108:did he have pets?
1yr
Other Reviews
Shinogami
ShinogamiLv15

Haven’t read the story yet just the synopsis But this genre is overused ok the asteroid making the vr possible is original but the « OMG MY GAME SKILL ARE NOW REAL LIFE SKILL » or « NO WAY THE GAME IS BECOMING REALITY » is like the Chinese arrogant young master in cultivation novel

2yr

Muhammed_Ajnas_3202
Muhammed_Ajnas_3202Lv3

very good book. you should also check out author's other books

1yr
tecbow
tecbowLv11

highly disappointing even after 150 he still does not have a class and events happen so fast.

2yr
BlackMango
BlackMangoLv12

I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case. I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better. I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.

2yr
90Bry
90BryLv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Derrice_Wilson
Derrice_WilsonLv13

I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good

2yr
OnionRerouted
OnionReroutedLv15

from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...

2yr
vicky111mudi
vicky111mudiLv5

I love this novel, Many novel have crippled MC at start, but within few chapters Most MC get cured and power up like super Saiyan. It's unique to see a MC struggle for so long. The world background is also great, it's chilling imagining his stay at A class for one day, the ruthlessness of the upper class after blackout was just too much and it showed us the glimpse of the true world background up close. This MC is unique as he struggling with all his family and his family is also struggling with him, they also showed great support to him while struggling with their own agenda . his families are not just for show in few openning chapters, and their presence is still great for the overall development of the novel, as they appears in chapters regularly. but update period is really lacking ...

2yr
Niquiito
NiquiitoLv10

----------------------------------Hero MC?---------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
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