Review Detail of _Louellia_ in Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

This story can be a hidden gem with lots of polishing, it can shine in the future.. Writing quality: There are some grammatical errors but didn't hinder much to your reading. Though I feel some dialogues a bit wordy, clunky and unnatural like if a person talks to a normal conversation, it usually brief or direct to the point without much dramatic words unless they are preaching, teaching or having public orientation. Story Development. The story is still starting but a lot of potential development is already brewing. Character Design. Estelle, the female lead seems to be a likeable character already. I just hope she didn't end up being a Mary Sue. Updating Stability. Nothing much to say here yet since the story is still starting. World Background. A lot to see and anticipate. She rebirth back to 2010 and set in similar earth, so maybe we can see a lot of common things back on these years. Recommendation? If you're into rebirth stories, you can give this a try, it might suit your preferences like me. Good luck author, added this to my library.