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_Louellia_1yrPostedHi dear readers, author here! Things to expect in the story: - More on kingdom building and adventure. - Of course, magic. - Romance will be a slow burn. - Op and smart mc since she lived three times already. And I'm never a fan of nerfing my mc, will depend hahaha. Anyway if you are a fan of such plots, then you are welcome to read the Reincarnation of the Archmage. Happy Reading to all!
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This story can be a hidden gem with lots of polishing, it can shine in the future.. Writing quality: There are some grammatical errors but didn't hinder much to your reading. Though I feel some dialogues a bit wordy, clunky and unnatural like if a person talks to a normal conversation, it usually brief or direct to the point without much dramatic words unless they are preaching, teaching or having public orientation. Story Development. The story is still starting but a lot of potential development is already brewing. Character Design. Estelle, the female lead seems to be a likeable character already. I just hope she didn't end up being a Mary Sue. Updating Stability. Nothing much to say here yet since the story is still starting. World Background. A lot to see and anticipate. She rebirth back to 2010 and set in similar earth, so maybe we can see a lot of common things back on these years. Recommendation? If you're into rebirth stories, you can give this a try, it might suit your preferences like me. Good luck author, added this to my library.
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This is exciting. I wonder what will her club perform on this.
"Club Introduction Performance: July 16, 2010." She muttered to herself. - _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 5 Queen of Delinquents!
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 1 Volume 1.1 The unexpected
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 3 Revise
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My ghad, Angel of Miracles, so cringe hahaha.
'Together the four of them were called the Angel of Miracles due to their outstanding talents.' - _Louellia_1yrCommented
If I'm right, they are talking about going to Bohol right? Why is it Antique all of the sudden here?
"Then have you already booked a flight to Antique?!" - _Louellia_1yrCommented
An idol is still a human though. There life is just more open to public. But they deserve respect as well.
"But he is an idol and really well known to so many people. In the entertainment industry, he should have expected things to become like that.' - _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 128 Volume 4.127 Moments of Joy
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 127 Volume 4.126 Fate of Her Race (2)
- _Louellia_1yrReplied to Kita_KitsuneCh 127 Volume 4.126 Fate of Her Race (2)
- _Louellia_1yrCommentedCh 76 Volume 2.75 Those she left behind (4)
- _Louellia_2yrCommentedCh 1 The Chase
- _Louellia_2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue