Review Detail of trumpet_creeper01 in Erasing You From My Memory
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Cool story. I liked the progression of the plot, it was decent, but there are some things that need to be corrected. Otherwise, the narrating style is good. I feel sad for the characters and author did a great job in potraying their sadness and inner turmoil.
Erasing You From My Memory
Biva
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hlo, there are grammar errors here and there and spelling mistakes. So maybe giving a proof read is enough to correct them. Have a nice day and good luck to the WPC.
Biva:Can you tell me what can be corrected...plz
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trumpet_creeper01:hlo, there are grammar errors here and there and spelling mistakes. So maybe giving a proof read is enough to correct them. Have a nice day and good luck to the WPC.