Ugh where should I start, the character interactions are really weird. 3 year old characters are acting like their teenager selves from the anime. Our 3 year old MC is trying to flirt with Ino Yamanaka. A 3 year old Naruto is speaking like his 16 year old self and telling he is going to be the Hokage calmly. That same 3 year old Naruto lives alone, goes to market to buy cup ramen to fill up his stocks. But it all totally makes sense. Let me tell you how. Kakashi became genin at 5 years old. As in someone who fights and kills in the name of Konoha. And someone who is granted adult rights and responsibilities. So he is as capable as an adult, and can do anything an adult can do. So someone 2 years younger than an adult Kakashi is nearly an adult himself. So he can flirt, start using alcohol, have unprotected seggs, become a member of gangs, sell drugs. These are some examples a normal 3 year old child in Elemental Nations is capable of.

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this woulf be good but the mc is to passive and scared of anything...boasts of defying Destiny and fate yet is too scared to even try to fight back himself such a hypocrite...another potential masterpiece ruined by yet another incompetent and stupid author...

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Me decepcionó un poco el desarrollo del fanfic, que no tenga chakra, se me hace que era mejor que tenga el mismo problema de lee, lo del pergamino que encontro es un boludes también, luego la parte de las serpientes no me gusto ni un poco, con la cantidad de personajes en naruto disponibles el prota se va a cojer con serpientes

I'm only going through the first chapter, but I must say that it was a good one, besides that the idea of ​​the novel is good, I will be attentive to the update and I hope there are more chapters.

this isnt a review but a question can he use a sharingan without his chakra? i gave 4 star cause i haven't read yet. ....................................

A pretty interesting idea. It's pretty good so far (chapter 2). [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Это какая-то хрень. Я читал много всякого... Эта вещь не так что бы уж слишком плоха... Наруто все таки, но то как развивается история, герой... слишком все... странно и не логично... не могу это читать дальше