Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in GOT: Bjorn The King Beyond The Wall

the way characters interact with each other is not good...very awkward ! the Mc supposed to be Bjorn but he is very arrogant ..and he is gonna be a vassal for the starks but his plan is yo be kong of the whole North so we have a arrogant Mc who is oathbreaker ! the author doesn't even explain how lyarra stark is alive when she supposed to die when benjen is born...yea anyway this work need much work but the author has not experience !