Review Detail of Ian_White in Black Clover: Training system

Writing quality is abysmal. The sentence structure worse than a teenagers. I read about 10 chapters and it took me 30 minutes because of the migraine it gave me in the first chapter. There are commas where there should be spaces, capitalization is non-existent, and the flow doesn’t match in any sentence. It feels as if each sentence is a thought and not apart of the paragraph. Updates appear to be every 2-3 days, so no problem with stability. Story Development is hardly noticeable due to the bad writing quality. If I had to give it a rating it would be average. Character Design is barely up to par. Most of the characters are already made (it is a fan-fic after all) and the writer shows a moderate ability to copy the original story design. The original characters made were average in quality with no good or bad points to critique. World Background is not explained much, though it is a given considering the story is about. It would be nice to have an explanation/refresher on the power systems introduced so I give it a mediocre rating.