Item: RWBY: Wayward Enchantment
Rating: 5
Author: Valfren

ValfrenLv42yr

2022-08-09 01:57

good start, great potential, hope to see more of your writing. and about the dark theme you want for your book, you should be more daring and more comfortable writing the scene, so its becoming less of awkward and more natural.

RWBY: Wayward Enchantment

ZeOwl

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35 Chs

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ZeOwlAuthor

This is good advice, I'll try to get a hold of what you mean

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