first this novel look like what I would read harem,r18,magic hope that MC is smart and don't look weak in front of girls I hope author you can tell me ? and finally author I have rule I don't read novel till it reach 100 chapters this authors are not finishing there novels I need to be cautious so when you hit 100 I will star I'm waiting because i don't have what to read

Honestly, I'm genuinely enjoying this novel, but I have two complaints -- one is a minor, subjective thing that I personally am not a fan of, but I am only including it for the sake of honesty because it should be noted that most people would disagree with me. This first criticism is that the development of the harem itself is extremely slow given the limited available content. If there were three thousand chapters out, the speed of their inclusion and the development of the relationships would be fine. But 130 chapters in, he is only technically with a single person. There are two others who are "potential" members, but there is no knowing when they will make that happen. Most people like slow developments, and I am not criticizing it as objectively wrong, but it certainly is a slow burn. The second criticism is a real one, however, and I feel most people would agree with that. The author's writing style became, VERY quickly, extremely repetitive. He will repeat the exact same sentence in several variants back to back to back, as though the reader was incapable of grasping his point without having it forced down their throat. This is the perfect example, and a true outtake from the book in chapter 131: After talking with Ace for several minutes, Layla suddenly felt sleepy. "Ace, I'm sleepy." It was raining heavily, and it felt comfortable in Ace's arms, so she suddenly felt sleepy. "If you are sleepy, you can sleep now." Ace told her to sleep if she was sleepy. " That's a real series of sentences really pulled from the real novel. And that's not an outlier moment, there are examples of that style throughout the entire thing -- frankly, it becomes extremely annoying, but given the positive aspects surrounding it, it's bearable to a degree.

Nice novel. I'm waiting for another beautiful harem. hmm hmm. Just like that.

The novel got off to a good start. As always, there are beauties in heaven. I can't say I don't like it. more beginning. I wonder how it will develop.

It's an actually funny novel, something I don't see all that often on webnovel these days. Furthermore the characters I've met so far are likeable and it's all in all a great story

I enjoyed it for quite some time but after a while it started feeling like author no longer put any effort into being consistent. he just writes whatever with no regards for the plot holes it creates, making it suddenly feel very one dimensional and forced.

author suck. update rate suck. story suck. don't read.

update rate sucks..........................

Love your book. Kindly please increase the chapter release. Please use grammaly for spelling and grammar mistakes. Looking forward to future chapters hopefully will get writing quality like your other novel and some lemon scenes.

could be fun .. keep it up .. needs more gods and better quests and system usage by mc .. ....................................................................