after the timeskip where hinata, sakura and ino seemed to stay with the mc, all those interactions and chapters (I know they needed to grow but if they weren't going to be in the initial harem why focus so much on them) so they would start a relationship with naruto (hinata) and sasuke (sakura and ino) was a waste of time, then you tried to correct it for all the negative comments, but in my opinion it got worse, maybe it could have improved if it had continued as you had planned, I don't know , the only thing that I really liked was the mc it had so much potential. I don't understand all these reviews with 4.5 and 5.0 *, you are one of my favorite authors, and I love all your other fanfictions, but this novel is not one of your best works, of course this is just my opinion, and well please keep writing and good luck, (mostly Google traductor)
Einlion
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