From the first chapter I already know that it is just a wish fulfillment of the author. It had so much potential for me, but it destroyed it all with a hacking system.
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LIKEI'm using google translator, so the translation is bad. You gave the protagonist a broken system, he'll be strong in two seconds, the whole Shippuden won't last 150 chapters unless you fill it with useless stuff. There are things that were overlooked, but these are the protagonist's absurd advantages:
jojojo66:Hacking system ? If you not like the system you don't read.You didn't tell any problem in story and give this a 2.5star? How the system is a hacking system I don't understand .
Part 2 Naruto's talent in chakra control and his Uzumaki lineage; knowledge about the future of history and the previous world; naruto's teachers are elite ninjas; the original Naruto always had a hard time learning complex things, but the protagonist is an obvious exception, so he can learn a lot more jutsus.
jojojo66:Hacking system ? If you not like the system you don't read.You didn't tell any problem in story and give this a 2.5star? How the system is a hacking system I don't understand .
Part 3 The problem is not the system tag, but the system you created. It has few limitations in the system, increasing the protagonist's power very fast.
jojojo66:Hacking system ? If you not like the system you don't read.You didn't tell any problem in story and give this a 2.5star? How the system is a hacking system I don't understand .
judging from your comment I suppose you didn't even read 10 chapters before review it.Anyway thnx for the review
Febfew:I'm using google translator, so the translation is bad. You gave the protagonist a broken system, he'll be strong in two seconds, the whole Shippuden won't last 150 chapters unless you fill it with useless stuff. There are things that were overlooked, but these are the protagonist's absurd advantages: